We are learning how to add description to our writing by including ideas from our senses and creating Show not Tell sentences. We made popcorn in class and got to hear, smell, touch, see and taste it.
Hi Braeden, Oh you made me feel hungry for popcorn when I read your writing, I could certainly smell and taste it in my mind! I am sure you all enjoyed that experiment! Keep up the great writing, Mrs H
Hi Braeden,
ReplyDeleteOh you made me feel hungry for popcorn when I read your writing, I could certainly smell and taste it in my mind! I am sure you all enjoyed that experiment! Keep up the great writing,
Mrs H
Mmmmm popcorn! Yum! Great descriptions Braeden, you captured the process well.
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Ooh! That is the first time you have used a Piktochart to publish your writing. You even managed to get some onomatopoeia into your story. Great job!!
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