Yesterday, the teachers brought in some kidneys and hearts. We used our five senses to describe them. Once we had some descriptive words the teachers dissected the organs! The kidneys stunk! Mrs B even cooked some for us to try!
Today we had to write an story or poem on the experience. I chose an acrostic poem. Hope you enjoy it.😋
There are also some photos😁😃
Lamb Kidney Acrostic Poem
Lingering smells find the room.
Aha! My fingers explore the smooth, moist surface.
Marbled meat of brownish colour.
Blood vessels leaking blood.
King of keeping the blood clean.
Important like bees.
Disgustingly different.
Nasty smell running through my nose.
Ears listening to the sizzling pan.
Yuck, no more for me today, thanks!
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Your writing is amazing Braeden. Trying out the kidney and heart was certainly interesting wasn't it?.Your writing was real show not tell!.
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