The last few weeks we have been learning about similes,personification and metaphors. Then we had to write a recount about a personal event and include as many of these gems as we could. Read though my story and try to find them. Here it is..
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Black Olive
“Argh” mumbled the car when Dad tried turning the key. It was a Saturday night and my Mum, Dad, Brother and I were going to the Black Olive for dinner. The gravel crunched under the car’s weight as it slowly walked down the driveway. When we arrived we saw our Nanna and Grandpa jump out of their little silver car and into the cold, dark night. It was as cold as Antarctica outside.We approached the gleaming restaurant that stood proudly in the cold night air. “It’s so warm in here” exclaimed my brother removing his jacket once we had entered the building.
Crash! Bang! Crunch. Was the sound we heard when we walked past the kitchen and to our table. When we were seated we ordered squid and some pizza bread to share. It arrived and it looked pretty as a autumn tree doing the tango! We each reached for a fraction of the pizza bread and some squid. The pizza bread tasted like summer and spring mixed together along with a hint of autumn. The squid was covered in golden breadcrumbs and was very crunchy! Once we had finished we ordered our main. I chose blue cheese pasta. It was delicious! It was full of pasta, chicken and a creamy sauce. The fork dug into the pasta like a spade. The pasta was as creamy as chocolate. The pasta waltzed across the plate as I swirled it around my fork.When I went to lift it to my mouth you could hear their painful cries.
“Thank you for coming hope to see you soon” said the Waitress. We waved goodbye to our Nanna and Grandpa and flowed away down the stairs and into the car.
It was extremely delicious and I can’t wait to come back next time!
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