Kia ora
This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write a thank you letter.
Something I think I have done well is including ideas about how I felt but
next time I think I could improve reading through my sentences as my teacher found I had a word missing. I also need to work on knowing where to put a comma.
Ka kite ano
7 September 2016
Room 9
Ohaeawai Primary
Tennyson Street
Ohaeawai 0472
Dear Mum and Dad
I am writing to thank you very much for letting me go on the ski trip last week.
I really enjoyed the whole week and loved everything about it. My favorite part was the snow.❄
I would really love to go skiing again one day, with you.⛷
Love from Braeden❤
Hi my name is Reagan and I go to Awahono School. And I really think that week would be fun if I went as well. Maybe next time you could say if you had gone skiing before.
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