My description writing.

Hello: This week we have been learning about using your senses to write good descriptions. We had to write a description about an animal. Here is my paragraph plan. I chose to write about a seal.

20th June, 2016

To describe an animal in order to build a picture in the reader’s head.

Introduction

Who or what are you describing? A Seal

Attributes                              E= elaborate, explain, example

Looks like?	Soggy snout                                          Flappy flippers                                      Squishy belly
Moves Like?	Graceful ballerina                                 Darting dart                                    Slippery sponge
Lives Like?	Shiney fish                                    Antarctica                                  Squishy squid

Summary: Include a feeling, thought or observation about your animal

I think that the seal is special because it glides through the water like a knife cutting through an oozy chocolate cake.