This is a example of me using adverbs in my writing
Autumn
Autumn
Crunch crunch crunch. Slowly I walked through a pile of leaves as I tried to round up the sheep but they kept running away like racing cars. I heard the sound of birds migrating to warmer countries. I stared up at the sky and saw the dark clouds.They looked like the inside of a dark cave. Finally our dog decided to come and help move the sheep. Loudly the dog barked at the sheep and chased them into the other paddock. I ran over as fast as I could and shut the gate. Slowly my dog and I walked back to our house.
This is great writing Braeden. I am so impressed by your use of drawing to support the story. Keep up the excellent work mate.
ReplyDeleteWow Braeden I am so proud of your work! Thank you for sharing such lovely writing .. you are a very good storywriter! Well done Mrs Craig for giving your class so many great opportunities to learn and share their work!
ReplyDeleteBraeden, I love the images you have created, like the sheep running around like racing cars. Interesting way of putting it.
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